Lyrical Anarchy

Poetic Justice!



Rotten unexpected savior
Unsavory behavior
Belabored the inevitable
Forgotten rejected familiar
Unsettled and bewildered
Killer of the terrible
Surrender all that was labored
No longer the favored
Behavior regrettable
Pretender to image created
No longer the hated
Imitation is bearable
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10 comments on “Mask

  1. Shackled and Crowned
    February 7, 2014

    I really really lived these words.
    You did a great job here, placing the words perfectly to create harmony.
    Well done.🙂

    • Edward Hotspur
      February 7, 2014

      Well, hello there, stranger. Thanks for stopping by and complimenting the shit out of me. I really appreciate it!

  2. hastywords
    February 13, 2014

    I love this poem…
    but this pic is haunting…I should paint it… or something…ya know…digitally because I can’t really paint.

    • Edward Hotspur
      February 13, 2014

      Wish I could. I would never just pass it off as mine.

      In fact, all you readers, if a picture looks painted or is of very high quality, the odds are extremely good that I did not do it. I mostly have pictures of patterns and of the sky. I drew a torii once that was fairly decent. Dry erase markers on whiteboard!

      • hastywords
        February 13, 2014

        Lol if I do draw something I have to tell people otherwise they would be like why did she pick that awful picture. If I steal a pic I give credit somehow. But seriously this pic is really super cool.

      • Edward Hotspur
        February 13, 2014

        I write everything, 99% anyway, but pictures on here are like Pinterest to me. I did stop downloading and then uploading them, though. I think as long as they’re linked, that’s okay.

      • hastywords
        February 13, 2014

        I think it’s fine you never said you did them lol

      • Edward Hotspur
        February 13, 2014

        Yeah. I am not talented with the drawing. I can aim a camera at something that’s already there, but that’s about it.

      • hastywords
        February 13, 2014

        Lol ur funny

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